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| Ham of the Problematique wrote: | That's an awesome personal statement. It gives exactly the right statement  Your opening is really quite well crafted too, which I like.
Can I point out a couple of technical things though?
"All of these experiences in and out of school has given me" should be 'have'.
Also, were I you, I would say 'from a young age' rather than "since a young age".
But yes, well done for getting through it after all the UCAS trauma too! |
| ashentara wrote: | | same here, it's really, really good in my opinion, states everything clearly, it's never boring and reads very well. |
Thanks guys! 
Thank you for pointing those things out as well Hannah, i'll go change them now.
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| Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:20 pm Post subject: |
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Mmmm Personal Statements... I've just written one today for the easiest module of the year (Personal Development and Planning) basicly getting CVs up to scratch ready for looking for placements and developing ourselves/confidence as a person so we can stand infront of people confidently.
Yesterday was a good day because Forza Motorsport 3 arrived, went to Jolie's house because that's where my xbox is so I went over there to have a play while she was doing some work and it's blown me away at just how good it is, quite possibly one of the best racing games I've ever played (and I've played pretty much all of them since 1992!).
Here's a screenshot I took of my Ford Focus RS (my dream car!  )
http://img.photobucket.com/albums...rza%20Motorsport%203/focusrs1.jpg
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| Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:10 pm Post subject: |
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you geek lol
glad you had a great time Chris!
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| Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:34 pm Post subject: |
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| mr_x wrote: | Mmmm Personal Statements... I've just written one today for the easiest module of the year (Personal Development and Planning) basicly getting CVs up to scratch ready for looking for placements and developing ourselves/confidence as a person so we can stand infront of people confidently.
Yesterday was a good day because Forza Motorsport 3 arrived, went to Jolie's house because that's where my xbox is so I went over there to have a play while she was doing some work and it's blown me away at just how good it is, quite possibly one of the best racing games I've ever played (and I've played pretty much all of them since 1992!).
Here's a screenshot I took of my Ford Focus RS (my dream car! )
http://img.photobucket.com/albums...rza%20Motorsport%203/focusrs1.jpg |
So I should buy that game then? 
Do you have xbox live?
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mr_x
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| StarlightInTheGloom wrote: | | mr_x wrote: | Mmmm Personal Statements... I've just written one today for the easiest module of the year (Personal Development and Planning) basicly getting CVs up to scratch ready for looking for placements and developing ourselves/confidence as a person so we can stand infront of people confidently.
Yesterday was a good day because Forza Motorsport 3 arrived, went to Jolie's house because that's where my xbox is so I went over there to have a play while she was doing some work and it's blown me away at just how good it is, quite possibly one of the best racing games I've ever played (and I've played pretty much all of them since 1992!).
Here's a screenshot I took of my Ford Focus RS (my dream car! )
http://img.photobucket.com/albums...rza%20Motorsport%203/focusrs1.jpg |
So I should buy that game then?
Do you have xbox live? |
If you like some racing/car porn, then yes. 
My gamertag is btccmad. 
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SuperGinge
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| mr_x wrote: | | StarlightInTheGloom wrote: | | mr_x wrote: | Mmmm Personal Statements... I've just written one today for the easiest module of the year (Personal Development and Planning) basicly getting CVs up to scratch ready for looking for placements and developing ourselves/confidence as a person so we can stand infront of people confidently.
Yesterday was a good day because Forza Motorsport 3 arrived, went to Jolie's house because that's where my xbox is so I went over there to have a play while she was doing some work and it's blown me away at just how good it is, quite possibly one of the best racing games I've ever played (and I've played pretty much all of them since 1992!).
Here's a screenshot I took of my Ford Focus RS (my dream car! )
http://img.photobucket.com/albums...rza%20Motorsport%203/focusrs1.jpg |
So I should buy that game then?
Do you have xbox live? |
If you like some racing/car porn, then yes.
My gamertag is btccmad. |
Awesome, i've been looking out for a decent car racing game for xbox. I get addicted to them soooo easily
I'll add you now then
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| StarlightInTheGloom wrote: | | mr_x wrote: | | StarlightInTheGloom wrote: | | mr_x wrote: | Mmmm Personal Statements... I've just written one today for the easiest module of the year (Personal Development and Planning) basicly getting CVs up to scratch ready for looking for placements and developing ourselves/confidence as a person so we can stand infront of people confidently.
Yesterday was a good day because Forza Motorsport 3 arrived, went to Jolie's house because that's where my xbox is so I went over there to have a play while she was doing some work and it's blown me away at just how good it is, quite possibly one of the best racing games I've ever played (and I've played pretty much all of them since 1992!).
Here's a screenshot I took of my Ford Focus RS (my dream car! )
http://img.photobucket.com/albums...rza%20Motorsport%203/focusrs1.jpg |
So I should buy that game then?
Do you have xbox live? |
If you like some racing/car porn, then yes.
My gamertag is btccmad. |
Awesome, i've been looking out for a decent car racing game for xbox. I get addicted to them soooo easily
I'll add you now then |
I'll accept it when I'm next at the xbox (which is 4 miles away at Jolie's house!)
Here's some more of my Ford Focus RS in Forza 3.. I do quite enjoy the photomode.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums...rza%20Motorsport%203/focusrs2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums...Motorsport%203/focusrsvschevy.jpg
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SuperGinge
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| Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:19 pm Post subject: |
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I got a Matt Bellamy card today.
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| Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:57 pm Post subject: |
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Excuse me? What do you mean?
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| Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:13 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome!!
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| Ham of the Problematique wrote: | | Awesome!! |
My sister told me it was a waste of money, and I was like....b...b...but it's Matt Bellamy! 
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